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1 do you still exist? on Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:53 pm

Erykaaaaaa

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this is a song i wrote eh its okay...


its hard to see you like this
i just wanna know your presence still exists
don’t wanna see you go away
for i can not live without you for a day

your sorrows make me wanna cry inside
while your broken on the outside
i wish i could change your thoughts
now you being happy is just sought

all i wanna see is your smile just once more
without it my life is such a bore
as you deepen into this awful state
your smile is fading at such high rate

its hard to see you like this
i just wanna know your presence still exists
i don’t wanna see you go away
for i can not live without you for a day

the hardest part of all this depression
is that i cant make any of it disappear
i have just one confession
i want your smile, your laugh to reappear

your tears are starting to drown you
why cant you come out of this
your smile is way over due

it breaks my heart to see you sit and stare
yet i cant stop myself from staying there
i believe i just care for you more than you know
i know you can pull yourself through

it wont be easy but your strong
you can prove everyone wrong
your face has never been so red
just think of the happiness waiting ahead

its hard to see you like this
i just wanna know your presence still exists
i don’t wanna see you go away
for i can not live without you for a day

ever since you have been like this
my life has been so empty
your smile was something i looked forward to
now its disappeared off of this earth

i believe i just care for you more than you know
i know you can pull yourself through

what do you think?

2 Re: do you still exist? on Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:46 pm

bebe; crazy bitch

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that was simply beautiful! Cool I loved it!!!

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3 Re: do you still exist? on Wed Feb 10, 2010 7:26 pm

Radiant

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i loved it. you should become a songwriter. they make good money. Smile

4 Re: do you still exist? on Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:39 pm

Erykaaaaaa

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thank you guys(: i didnt think it was that good

5 Re: do you still exist? on Wed Feb 10, 2010 10:46 pm

guitarfreak

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I'm blown away. that was really good. Gah, I wish I coud make those!

6 Re: do you still exist? on Thu Feb 11, 2010 1:24 pm

Erykaaaaaa

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haha thank you. and really all you have to do is have a topic like mine was my friend was really depressed and it felt like she wasnt there anymore and than i like to make mine rhyme

7 Re: do you still exist? on Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:13 am

aasshhlleeyy.

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wow thats amazing!

8 Re: do you still exist? on Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:57 am

Erykaaaaaa

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Danke (thank you in German)

9 Re: do you still exist? on Sat Mar 06, 2010 6:09 pm

aasshhlleeyy.

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aww cool ;D

10 Re: do you still exist? on Wed May 26, 2010 2:45 pm

crazyforyou

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damn. that was good. btw, your j.b. pic is so hot!

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